"Forgive me father
for I have sinned
the crumbs from your table
are never enough
And temptation
tastes of milk and honey
Oh give us this day
our daily bread
and a handful of silver
to forgive our trespasses
a salted benediction
to save our souls
before we are just ashes
and dust."
- The Sin Eater Siobhan Rodgers 2011 (via the-wordgirl)
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